Greetings! Professional Latinist here! I am so happy to see Latin being used in a VN! I noticed that there were some grammatical errors and awkward spots in Kerlno's spell and wanted to offer some suggestions to fix those.
Liquorum compositio, coite, exsolvimini...
-The imperatives here have been attracted into the plural because of liquorum, they though they should be singular to match the vocative compositio. If you want to keep the imperatives in the plural, I recommend changing liquorum compositio to something like liquores commixti. If you want to keep liquorum compositio, then I recommend changing coite to coi and exsolvimini to exsolvere.
ut gelus aeterni quod terras vexant...
-I would recommend using sicut or proinde here instead of ut, just to make things a bit clearer.
-Given the usage of vexant, the relative pronoun should be quae with undae as the antecedent. If you want gelus to be the antecedent, then keep quod and change vexant to vexat.
Este caeli gelidi gemma...
-The imperative has been attracted into the plural again, like in the first sentence. If you use something like liquores commixti, then you can keep este. Otherwise make este singular to make it agree with compositio.
...saussurea involucrata pruinosa.
-This phrase is awkward, literally reading as "frosty/frostily enveloped". I would recommend either making pruinosa a noun for frost or just dropping involucrata.
ut confundamini velut ampla nix penetrabilis estis...
-This phrase reads rather awkwardly, such that it doesn't make a lot of sense in the Latin. I would highly recommend rephrasing this part. An example of such rephrasing could be something like this: ut in essentiam nivis immensae acerbaeque mutemini (plur)/muteris (sing).
-Attracted plural verb again with confundamini.
...ruatis, iubeo!
-Another attracted plural verb with ruatis.
-The verb iubeo does not use indirect command, but instead uses an accusative infinitive construction. If you want to keep the indirect commands as they are, use impero instead.
If you make the following changes, the Latin should become clearer. If you would like stylistic feedback to make the spell match the translated poetic flare, I would be happy to help. Thank you for writing this wonderful work!
I'm during chapter 3, but enjoyed it enough to leave a comment now instead of after finishing.
This is great work, and I need to thank whoever was responsible for Kerlno's lines (I only read it in English, and so I wish to know if Kerlno's quirks are 100% loyal to his Chinese portrayal). Like, I don't know why, but to me it feels like Kerlno REALLY cares about Tex, and means some of his teasing (especially the flirtatious ones). I mean, just look at these.
C'mon. I can't be the only one who thinks he's testing the waters and not actually teasing.
Hello, I’m kinda new to this game and I would like to know a few things, if possible? Like if this game SFW, how is the gameplay (like basic visual novel for example) does it have an English translation, if yes at what point? how long is it and if there are any red flags (like abuse, manipulation, Gore, etc)
If you do answer me I’ll be very glad to play your game.
P.S:I LOVE the art style and silly faces.
Translator here - yes, this game is SFW, but have brutal description (No full depicted gore, but there is potential gore. Abuses are alluded to and voiced in words, but no actual depiction, as is manipulation).
It DOES have a English translation (Of all the 4 chapters that are released) - as well as Chinese Mode (Which is the original, and you can switch between with will.)
The gameplay is extremely long - I am estimating, if you are only playing one route, 10 hours or so (Average read speed), and longer if you are slow. If you explore multiple routes (Which by the way, is more of hanging out with characters - the FVN is linear), it will take up to 30-40 hours across 4 chapters.
Hope it helps to answer your question! Please enjoy.
Gosh where can i access the bgm because some of the music playing in the scenes are just so good it made me teared up. I need it directly injected into my veins.
Great VN btw! I'm on chapter 3 and I enjoyed it very much.
Hey buddy how are you, I hope you are okay, are we going to be continuing this game for the next update and are we going to be soon finding our brother, and are there going to be updates for NSFW sex scenes in the future? And may I have permission to record this as a series for my YouTube that I can link your game and profile for people to download the game, Would you like that?
This game will HOPEFULLY get the Chinese update before the end of this year, and no idea of when the brother appears.
As for NSFW scenes - this is a no.
Finally - yes, you have permission as a series for your Youtube, and you may link the game for people to come and watch + download! Please, enjoy this FVN! Please also present a link of the Youtube series video on here, as proof, should you wish.
Ждал такой вопрос и я рад что ответ "нет". Я начал прыгать от счастья. В этой игре эти сцены вообще не нужны, в игре главное сюжет. Было бы странно спустя СТОЛЬКО времени добавлять их. Самое оптимальное это добавить сцену обнимашек ну или что-то в этом роде.
1. 2 месяца назад прочитал новеллу (мой комментарий есть внизу) , все ещё каждый день захожу на сайт игры в надежде что обновление вышло, но увы нет :(
Слежу за постами в Блюскае и Твиттере (X), надеясь что выйдет новый пост про обновление.
Я готов ещё ждать, надеюсь это не затянется на долго.
2. Вот мне интересно было спросить, а выборы повлияют на сюжет в дальнейшем? Просто выбрав одного из персонажей основной сюжет не меняется, просто как отдельная история, а потом идёт сам сюжет.
3. Ещё вопрос, вот в Бай Юя и Теха (Текса) кинули мешочек с каким-то порошком, если не ошибаюсь то Бай Бай это вдохнул ( я точно не помню, читал 2 месяца назад), повлияет это на сюжет в дальнейшем?
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Планирую прочитать заново новеллу полностью, если будут какие-то не состыковки в моём комментарии (3.) , то я их поправлю.
Hey, buddy - production lately for chapter 5 has been intense, as many characters are introduced - so it will be taking a bit longer in terms of creating it
But we hope to release before the end of this year - at least the Chinese, and try our fastest in producing Chapter 5 translation for the people out there!
There is a bill in congress right now that would make it illegal for any financial service provider to directly or indirectly prohibit or inhibit any legal transaction. It's called the Fair Access to Banking Act. H.R.987 in the House, S.401 in the Senate. Call your Representatives. Get it passed.
Would it be possible to reduce this size? I don't know how it happens, maybe you already did it, but I've seen some other renpy fvns reducing their file sizes by around half somehow.
I reckon you might be able to lower it's size by converting the sprites/cgs into webp files, if that is top priority, since it will take a lot of effort to convert everything, principally on such a big game, so it might not be worth the effort, but if you're worried that the final product, considering the game right now already is huge, would have too much size, it would probably be better to start now sooner than later
The sprites/cgs are already webp files, and as such, that is why it can be a bit hesitant - though if push comes to shove, we might have to consider lowering the quality of the cgs and sprites a little to improve the size compression.
Hello, Mister. Until we have a good group of people who could efficiently provide us good Russian translation, we cannot add it in. Hopefully one day though, as we welcome more language
This is the Hollow Knight of furry visual novels. Absolute kino. Peak. 10/10. P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Hopefully there will be some tasteful SFW romance, it would be a bit of a shame for it to not have even a little something.
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My opinion of Kerlno in a nutshell
If this isn't accurate, I don't know what is.
Greetings! Professional Latinist here! I am so happy to see Latin being used in a VN! I noticed that there were some grammatical errors and awkward spots in Kerlno's spell and wanted to offer some suggestions to fix those.
Liquorum compositio, coite, exsolvimini...
-The imperatives here have been attracted into the plural because of liquorum, they though they should be singular to match the vocative compositio. If you want to keep the imperatives in the plural, I recommend changing liquorum compositio to something like liquores commixti. If you want to keep liquorum compositio, then I recommend changing coite to coi and exsolvimini to exsolvere.
ut gelus aeterni quod terras vexant...
-I would recommend using sicut or proinde here instead of ut, just to make things a bit clearer.
-Given the usage of vexant, the relative pronoun should be quae with undae as the antecedent. If you want gelus to be the antecedent, then keep quod and change vexant to vexat.
Este caeli gelidi gemma...
-The imperative has been attracted into the plural again, like in the first sentence. If you use something like liquores commixti, then you can keep este. Otherwise make este singular to make it agree with compositio.
...saussurea involucrata pruinosa.
-This phrase is awkward, literally reading as "frosty/frostily enveloped". I would recommend either making pruinosa a noun for frost or just dropping involucrata.
ut confundamini velut ampla nix penetrabilis estis...
-This phrase reads rather awkwardly, such that it doesn't make a lot of sense in the Latin. I would highly recommend rephrasing this part. An example of such rephrasing could be something like this: ut in essentiam nivis immensae acerbaeque mutemini (plur)/muteris (sing).
-Attracted plural verb again with confundamini.
...ruatis, iubeo!
-Another attracted plural verb with ruatis.
-The verb iubeo does not use indirect command, but instead uses an accusative infinitive construction. If you want to keep the indirect commands as they are, use impero instead.
If you make the following changes, the Latin should become clearer. If you would like stylistic feedback to make the spell match the translated poetic flare, I would be happy to help. Thank you for writing this wonderful work!
Wow, this is a detailed description
Thanks! We will talk with our guy who worked on Latin and see what can be done
I'm during chapter 3, but enjoyed it enough to leave a comment now instead of after finishing.
This is great work, and I need to thank whoever was responsible for Kerlno's lines (I only read it in English, and so I wish to know if Kerlno's quirks are 100% loyal to his Chinese portrayal). Like, I don't know why, but to me it feels like Kerlno REALLY cares about Tex, and means some of his teasing (especially the flirtatious ones). I mean, just look at these.
C'mon. I can't be the only one who thinks he's testing the waters and not actually teasing.
Hello, I’m kinda new to this game and I would like to know a few things, if possible? Like if this game SFW, how is the gameplay (like basic visual novel for example) does it have an English translation, if yes at what point? how long is it and if there are any red flags (like abuse, manipulation, Gore, etc) If you do answer me I’ll be very glad to play your game. P.S:I LOVE the art style and silly faces.
Hey, hey!
Translator here - yes, this game is SFW, but have brutal description (No full depicted gore, but there is potential gore. Abuses are alluded to and voiced in words, but no actual depiction, as is manipulation).
It DOES have a English translation (Of all the 4 chapters that are released) - as well as Chinese Mode (Which is the original, and you can switch between with will.)
The gameplay is extremely long - I am estimating, if you are only playing one route, 10 hours or so (Average read speed), and longer if you are slow. If you explore multiple routes (Which by the way, is more of hanging out with characters - the FVN is linear), it will take up to 30-40 hours across 4 chapters.
Hope it helps to answer your question! Please enjoy.
Hey Kha
Still in work, as of currently - but Chinese will be releasing either at the end of 2025, or Chinese New Year 2026.
This will be the longest chapter yet in terms of word length, so please be patient.
Gosh where can i access the bgm because some of the music playing in the scenes are just so good it made me teared up. I need it directly injected into my veins.
Great VN btw! I'm on chapter 3 and I enjoyed it very much.
Mo Xia the best guy btw. I love him.
BGMs are royalty free. We may consider making a soundtrack player, but it must be when we make original.ost
If it's not a bother may i have the link of the source?
I will see what I can do. No guarantee
If u want bgm, download tianhehui.apk and download app 7zip (extract apk file). You will get all bgm ( and GC if u device can read .avif file)
这个同是错别字吗
是的
以后有机会改
Hey buddy how are you, I hope you are okay, are we going to be continuing this game for the next update and are we going to be soon finding our brother, and are there going to be updates for NSFW
sexscenes in the future? And may I have permission to record this as a series for my YouTube that I can link your game and profile for people to download the game, Would you like that?Hey Snowey:
This game will HOPEFULLY get the Chinese update before the end of this year, and no idea of when the brother appears.
As for NSFW scenes - this is a no.
Finally - yes, you have permission as a series for your Youtube, and you may link the game for people to come and watch + download! Please, enjoy this FVN!
Please also present a link of the Youtube series video on here, as proof, should you wish.
Ждал такой вопрос и я рад что ответ "нет". Я начал прыгать от счастья. В этой игре эти сцены вообще не нужны, в игре главное сюжет. Было бы странно спустя СТОЛЬКО времени добавлять их. Самое оптимальное это добавить сцену обнимашек ну или что-то в этом роде.
1. 2 месяца назад прочитал новеллу (мой комментарий есть внизу) , все ещё каждый день захожу на сайт игры в надежде что обновление вышло, но увы нет :(
Слежу за постами в Блюскае и Твиттере (X), надеясь что выйдет новый пост про обновление.
Я готов ещё ждать, надеюсь это не затянется на долго.
2. Вот мне интересно было спросить, а выборы повлияют на сюжет в дальнейшем? Просто выбрав одного из персонажей основной сюжет не меняется, просто как отдельная история, а потом идёт сам сюжет.
3. Ещё вопрос, вот в Бай Юя и Теха (Текса) кинули мешочек с каким-то порошком, если не ошибаюсь то Бай Бай это вдохнул ( я точно не помню, читал 2 месяца назад), повлияет это на сюжет в дальнейшем?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Планирую прочитать заново новеллу полностью, если будут какие-то не состыковки в моём комментарии (3.) , то я их поправлю.
Всё ещё жду обновление ♥
Hey, buddy - production lately for chapter 5 has been intense, as many characters are introduced - so it will be taking a bit longer in terms of creating it
But we hope to release before the end of this year - at least the Chinese, and try our fastest in producing Chapter 5 translation for the people out there!
Спасибо за ответ ♥ Жду с нетерпением
Удачи в работе над игрой :)
https://www.change.org/p/tell-mastercard-visa-activist-groups-stop-controlling-what-we-can-watch-read-or-play
There is a bill in congress right now that would make it illegal for any financial service provider to directly or indirectly prohibit or inhibit any legal transaction. It's called the Fair Access to Banking Act. H.R.987 in the House, S.401 in the Senate. Call your Representatives. Get it passed.
the collective shout wouldn't affect this game cause it's not porn and don't have nudity in any way
1.6 GB 0_0
Would it be possible to reduce this size? I don't know how it happens, maybe you already did it, but I've seen some other renpy fvns reducing their file sizes by around half somehow.
The price of having 400cgs. We can always make our music file smaller
But otherwise
Expect Tianhehui to be giant in size.
I reckon you might be able to lower it's size by converting the sprites/cgs into webp files, if that is top priority, since it will take a lot of effort to convert everything, principally on such a big game, so it might not be worth the effort, but if you're worried that the final product, considering the game right now already is huge, would have too much size, it would probably be better to start now sooner than later
The sprites/cgs are already webp files, and as such, that is why it can be a bit hesitant - though if push comes to shove, we might have to consider lowering the quality of the cgs and sprites a little to improve the size compression.
itch版本换renpy了吗，和以前的版本有什么区别吗
没有。虽然模块用的是Renpy了，但是内容几乎完全一致（修了点点错别字）。
并加上了章节选
3刷了，希望开学前能出ch5
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а можно сделать перевод на русский язык?
Возможно будет, если кто-нибудь из команды ExGames возьмётся за перевод, и если разработчики будут не против.
Изменено: возможно разработчики сами захотят (маловероятно) сделать перевод на русский
Hello, Mister. Until we have a good group of people who could efficiently provide us good Russian translation, we cannot add it in. Hopefully one day though, as we welcome more language
This is the Hollow Knight of furry visual novels. Absolute kino. Peak. 10/10. P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Hopefully there will be some tasteful SFW romance, it would be a bit of a shame for it to not have even a little something.